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Alone




Have you wanted to be,
Alone like me, alone like me alone.
Wake up one day and decide that,
You want to touch the sky,
But you want to touch it alone.

Alone I need to be.
Alone, some body take me home.
Because I, well I need to be alone.
Alone is all I need.
Alone is best for me.

Wake up in bed and open my eyes,
Alone I need, alone I need to be.
Pushing the day as the sun does rise,
Alone I need, alone I need to be.

Alone I need to be.
Alone somebody take me home.
Because I, well I need to be alone.
Alone is all I need.
Alone is best for me.
A poem for my good friend
He's been dealing with stuff lately...and i felt sorry for him. So, i did a little poem for him, because i knew how he felt. He dosen't deserve to be treated like crap....i hope you feel better man. He's a real nice guy once you get to know him, though he's hella funny too whenever i talk to him on the phone XD.

Poem(c)Xhile and TJ
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Denisaiko Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem is just amazing!!! I think you might be a great poet for singers and composers, what do you think? Would you mind if I use your poem for a song I'm making?
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sonnydey Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011   Writer
This speaks to me. amazing poem and i hope your friend is currently happy like all people deserve to be.
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PoemFromTheHeart Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011  Student Writer
I agree 100%
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regndyr Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009
its deeply beautiful <3~
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STEPHALICIOUS Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2008
Inspiring! =) a great poem! =]
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greeneyesandglasses Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the way the repetition seems to drive home the feelings in this poem. Or, perhaps I should "feeling". It does a wonderful job capturing the emotion that you seemed to conveying. Good job! ^)__(^q
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alyssinelysium Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008  Student Digital Artist
i be inspired!
-gets to work-
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lilelf93 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2007
thats good
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lorelai-87 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2007  Professional Photographer
Hey I have to do a photography assignment and I need a poem on which to base my photos ... and I was wondering if I could use your poem (I would give you full credit for it and everything)....
I like you your poem a lot by them way lol
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PrincessRinoa Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2005  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Poor person...everyone is down right now including me. ^^;
Any good poem really kind of you to do that ^^
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